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Light, shimmering in waves
Veils the land in white
In the haze of brightness, find
The ending of your night

Snow-covered slumber, wake
Reveal your aspirations
Walk beyond fields of hatred
And bind together nations

Throw open the rusted gate
Allow your neighbor passage
Forget old wrongs and sins
Of this chance, take advantage!

Let the cool waters bathe you
Release fear to the tides
Reach a gentle hand out and
Touch the child who hides

Draw all together with
The gravity of your trust
Brace together for the dawn
Found for life, a new lust
©2007-2009 ~Watashi-no-Yume
:iconwatashi-no-yume:

Author's Comments

Experimenting with rhyming, really. Pretty random poem again ^^;

Self-explanatory?

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:iconxfireandicex:
hmm this is extremely descriptive

i ♥ the imagery!

--
when it comes to sinners
you act like you're a pro
but you're just a beginner
i taught you everything
that you know

- breaking bones in abc order by dropout year
:iconwatashi-no-yume:
Thanks! :hug:

You sound like some prefessor of literature. I can imagine some old guy stroking his beard with a philosophical look on his face saying, "Hmm... Yes, yes, this is extremely descriptive..."

xDDD
:iconxfireandicex:
I am no man!! and i dont have a beard either!!! hhmph -begins to shave-


lol thats a big JK

--
when it comes to sinners
you act like you're a pro
but you're just a beginner
i taught you everything
that you know

- breaking bones in abc order by dropout year
:iconwatashi-no-yume:
Haha :giggle: I'm sure it is...
:iconxfireandicex:
hhmph it is!

--
when it comes to sinners
you act like you're a pro
but you're just a beginner
i taught you everything
that you know

- breaking bones in abc order by dropout year
:iconmizweb:
Hmmm.....I don't understand it, does it have a meaning?

--
~Lynn has spoken~
:iconwatashi-no-yume:
The theme sort-of developed as I was writing it.... Basically, it's about banding together despite differences and prejudices.
:iconmizweb:
Ah...I see it now. Forget old yep....cool.

--
~Lynn has spoken~

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